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Every day, I imagine a future where I can be with you?
In my hand is a pen that will write a poem of me and you
The ink flows down into a dark puddle
Just move your hand, write the way into his heart
But in this world of infinite choices
What will it take just to find that special day
What will it take just to find that special day
Have I found everybody a fun assignment to do today
When you're here, everything that we do is fun for them anyway
When I can't even read my own feelings
What good are words when a smile says it all
And if this world won't write me an ending
What will it take just for me to have it all
Does my pen only write bitter words for those who are dear to me
Is it love if I take you, or is it love if I set you free
The ink flows down into a dark puddle
How can I write love into reality?
If I can't hear the sound of your heartbeat
What do you call love in your reality
And in your reality, if I don't know how to love you
I'll leave you be
2 Answers
- 6 days ago
Decent, minor editing would improve it. Think of EWD, Extra Word Disorder, no offense, very often, Less really is More