I don't know how to end my murder story. Help?

Question

So theres a boy who goes travelling out of town and his tyre gets punctured because someone shot it with a dart. He goes to a garage across the road and he says he has no spare tyres without the boy even asking. He says if you need somewhere to stay theres a place 5 minutes around the corner. So he walks for about 15 minutes up a steep hill to a little lodge.

The idea is that the creepy man in the lodge shot his tyre so he would end up staying at his house.

How could the murder take place? and Who would murder who?
Im stuck on ideas so any help would be great.

Thanks :D

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it cood b lyke, wile hes eating breaktfast on day or somthin the creepy guy cood poison him or something. or the dude with the tires cood get cawt steeling something but he didnt no he was bein watched while steeling it n win the creepy guy confronts him he cood pull out a gun n shoot him or somethinn steel more of the money n get a tire off creepy guys truck n run away wit the body n take it to some lake n dump it in a deep place so it cant be found. then some one reports creepy dude missing n someone sai they saw him with tyre dude n they question him n let him go. but something happens n they have to call him bak n they start suspecting n put him on trial n all tht n then he go ta jail. he cood even break out of jail or something... but im no good at writing sooo, yep...P: But i like the second one best

♥☺♡✌♥☮ · Answer

maybe the man really turns out to be his long-lost mother dressed as a guy (with multipule personality disorder) and she wants to kill the boy because when she was pregnant with the boy he also had a twin but somehow something wrong happened when his mother was prego so the boy sort of like kills his twin brother (but not intentionally, completely real fiction here! cuz that sorta stuff happens, right?) and so the mother went mentally insane thinking that he did it on purpose and so she was taken away from him but she escaped some insane asylm and so now shes out to kill him and in the end she does but she kills herself too....... JUST A THOUGHT

Emma · Answer

I'd think slitting his throat while he sleeps, or if you want something more elaborate locking him in the basement and starving him to death. And the creepy man would kill the boy.

Anonymous · Answer

Awe, sounds good.
I'd really like to help but I'm not much of a crime novelist, more fantasy and related genres. Sorry.

I don't know how to end my murder story. Help?

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