Could you make suggestions for improvement in this poem?

Finger, oops I mean feather flipped, got my attention right away. I liked the levity.

Improvement Poem

With a look of disgust, she flipped me the feather

and said I wasn't worth the whole bird

she must've known she could do much better

as she walked away without a word

What I had done- was it really that wrong?

Any man would do the same in my place.

I always tried hard to keep getting along

Now she winces at the sight of my face

Would a dozen red roses make it right again?

Should I try to explain my side?

I didn't want to start a fight I couldn't win...

... but she wasn't going to let it slide.

This was a very enjoyable though sad poem, and I

do not see any need for improvement! Great, as is.

I love how you ended it, with a suggestive realization!

This made me both laugh and cry together, great job!

Really good ''Oh you

You always write interesting stuff

I have no suggestions for improvement of your poem Andy, it reads pretty good just as it is. As for the wrong answer, I'm not sure an apology would have made any difference. Pleased to get the chance to read this again.

A vivid, sad write Andy...I would tuck a bit of hope at the ending couplet.

I liked this the first time and I wanted to mention how much I liked the feather joke. Thanks for the chance to praise it again.

You are a master poet of few words

It's great the way that it is. Really liked it :)