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Andy P
I am Noble, Humble and Southern. I try to be as Honest as I can. My job is not to judge, but to help others. My knees are for praying, my heart is for Loving, head rattles around sometimes. I teach and learn, I win I lose, I have ups and downs like anyone. I balance my karma on my nose. You can ask anyone. I'll answer all question I can, but particularly: Mathematics, Science, Music, Poetry, Philosophy, History, Astronomy, Religion, well all most anything. Enjoy your stay. Ask something.
Cars kill people every day. Should we abolish car ownership?
14 AnswersPolitics6 years agoCould you make suggestions for the improvement of this poem?
Mister Young
I got up off the ground
without making a sound
when I finally found the disaster
While unbending my knees
caught my hair in the breeze
in one hundred degrees melting plaster
Watching girls of the world
raising dresses unfurled
while the questions were hurled so much faster
I was writing a play
on a sweet summer day
to her own known dismay so I cast her
She took talent and poise
from her suitcase of toys
said the mirror enjoys her reflection
Keeping up with the styles
weeping under her smiles
leaping over the piles of rejection
We clacked day after night
and came close to a fight
hoping she would invite my direction
But she took all the fame
even blew out my flame
she was playing the game of deception
3 AnswersPoetry7 years agoCould you make suggestions for improvement in this poem?
The Wrong Answer
Disgusted, she flipped me the feather
and said I wasn't worth the whole bird
she knew she could always do better
she walked away not saying a word
What I'd done, was it really that wrong?
What'd you do if you were in my place?
I wanted to try to get along
she wanted never to see my face
Would a dozen roses make things right?
Should I try to explain my own side?
I knew I didn't want a big fight
She wasn't going to let me slide
if only I could realize
I needed to... learn to live alone
~
10 AnswersPoetry7 years agoShould I edit my poem or is it okay?
The Singing Sun
Ask a wise one what lies behind
the smiling round face of the sun
Plato would explain how goodness
is the reason for all the fun
Goodness made visible by light--
comes from knowledge learned in your youth
gold sun and goodness illumines
the intelligible with truth
Listen to young sun and you'll hear
how low she sings, out into space
cup your ear to her mantra chant
a song pulsing in rhythmic bass
Pierce the darkness, break the silence
Add her song to all your time sensed
~
6 AnswersPoetry7 years agoIs there enough here to identify the poet?
Young William
Simple and graceful lyrics rise
from times most young boys do despise
numinous morality grow
from nature in a land of snow
A cottage where he hopes to find
philosophic songs for the mind
educated unstinting growth
witnessed by God and Country both
Ullswater Lake he stole a boat
a peak looked down and stole his cloak
pantheism thought teased his brain
spectacular visions on which to train
London was not the place to be
the Lake District had set him free
4 AnswersPoetry7 years agoIs it necessary for a poem to have a varied rhyming pattern?
Untitled
Black silhouettes row to sunset
where the orange ball ripples and waves
one light kiss of salty nape sweat
while one hand slightly misbehaves
Often knees begin to get wet
from the droplets where the oars lave
and brush under a bridge rosette
as all the bells ring from their graves
Scrape the bottom, drunken keel debt
there's nothing here the water saves
row until morning songs forget
anoint the forehead kneeling knaves
3 AnswersPoetry7 years agoPlease forgive me, would you?
I wanted to thank those who commented on my cannonball poem last week.
My delinquency in voting best answer is not a reflection on you.
I enjoyed every comment and I had a splash of a time with you for those moments.
Your comments I take to heart.~Andy
3 AnswersPoetry8 years agoPoetry: Do you try mind over matter sometimes?
Of Venice
Just a sun-puff across the square,
past the wild pigeons of St. Mark's,
is a quieter place for us,
a short journey; we may embark.
We dance in step up stairs and stop
atop a bridge where we can talk,
as gondolas slip-slather by
beneath our feet; below the hawk.
Bells resonate, peal demonstrates
we all ring-run down the calle.
Eclipse the noise, we find a shop
of finesse and delicacy.
Artists and craftsmen, hands of skill.
Glass beads, quite splendid and unique
made before eyes filled with wonder
made in the Bright Soul boutique
A deep blue forever keepsake
I clasp in gold around your neck
to honor your beauty and love
and show my eternal respect.
Can we glide together aboard
a gondola that slips through dreams
making love tunnel memories?
It can't be as hard it seems.
~
11 AnswersPoetry8 years agoPoetry: A Haiku for You and...?
Bbbzzzmmm
What has come to me
and what I have left behind
are a shoulder glace
~
4 AnswersPoetry8 years agoPoem: There is a time to every purpose, right?
Plant a Seed
Mid-summer, when peaches are ripe
and heavy with tasty respite
Fruit stands pop up by the side of the road
Tended by kids off from school
country faces with family rules
Shrewd and savvy as car salesmen might bode
Thirteen for three dollars, a steal
a quarter a piece, still a deal
I paid five dollars for a basket load
On checkered cotton table cloth
I placed my basket by my troth
Guests at my picnic could eat á la mode
Fruits from a tree, fruits of labor
shared with loved ones who can savor
and appreciate happily, seeds sowed
7 AnswersPoetry8 years agoPoem about, Who can quench my thirst?
Her Water Can
She knows I like, having her read
the poems I haven't written yet
Picking fruit straight from the seed
Toying with time's cause and effect
Affection near, before I am
Every little thing she does
I know she likes her water can
and overlapping ripples' love
Her basket fills with fragrant buds
she hands them to me one by one
We care not the reason because
our time allows us to be fun
.
4 AnswersPoetry8 years agoPoem: Have you ever chased rain clouds?
The Late Twentieth Century
Day after day of sun baked, heat of a drought
the thermometer's about to burst
puffy white clouds float in bright summer blue skies
not a drop to quench our building thirst
Baby, is it still hot out there on the porch?
'cause I'm burning up real bad inside
Maybe we could put some warm breeze in our hair
I'd do anything to go for a ride
We packed a lunch basket and we loaded the car
We headed to the hills west of town
Before we had driven, not half the way there
Huge raindrops had begun to come down
We stopped the car off from the highway a bit
Got out and danced wildly in the rain
People drove by us honking their nosy horns
They probably could think us insane.
Soon quite soaked to the bone in cool wet release
Unspoken and just laughing away
We took the long way back home, followed that cloud
When its hot now I think of that day
5 AnswersPoetry8 years agoIs it me or is it...?
The Moon is Laughing Again
I looked at the moon, it looked past my eyes
I pulled my black hat down tight
I said, “Hey old man I'm looking at you
'back for you later tonight!”
The “ Play Pool Here” sign lost a few letters
The first P and last L, gone.
It was dollar drinks night for certain girls
my guess, I could get along
Of course I was minding my own business
That's my usual story
She did the sly-glance, over her shoulder,
her bracelets, her perfume inside her wrists,
her hair, the locket around her neck.
She moved across the room to be nearer
her blink, the sway of her heart tatted hips,
her shoes, and the shade of her own lips.
when I came to later on
I told the moon, “Old man, don't look at me.”
3 AnswersPoetry8 years agoDoes this necessarily make me a scoundrel?
june bug
simple general spontaneity
she doesn't carry a script
a playful sense of curiosity
a diamond above her lip
a fashion minded spirit wearing jeans
to humor me and my hat
two-step across the oak knotted floor beams
a music note as her tat
we sang with the band and howled at the moon
waking with the morning sun
she fixed breakfast then left me around noon
our first date was the third one
9 AnswersPoetry8 years ago